Post by West on Nov 18, 2017 17:10:56 GMT
Wait a second...
Hey there! West here, and I'm going to be the staff member helping you through this part of the application process. Your app looked pretty good! However, there are a few changes that need to be made before we can accept your application. The needed changes are listed below:
Appearance --------
Everything looks great, but the only thing we would need is for Quynn to display more magi traits. Usually we ask for at least 3 magi traits. Since Quynn seems to be going down more of a bird-like aspect, you could give her talon-like fingernails, bird/harpy like feet, pointed ears, feathers growing in her hair, etc.
Biography --------
Everything here looks great as well; we would just need to know the country of origin Quynn comes from. Because Quynn did not live in the relocation camps we're assuming she has not lived in Ethea all her life. You can find the map here to pick the home country. You don't need a specific town, just the country name.
Also please mention what age she immigrated to Ethea; it can only be within 8 years at least due to the camps still being active up to this point in time.
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If you have any questions about anything stated above, please send a PM to my staff account West
